Monday, April 10, 2006

si tandas's homecoming

it's an inspirational poem while going to toilet with dom mh n wp

the physical journeythat i travel to the toilet
is a journey of my dick
transport from the class 5G
to a freakin-smelly toilet
the urine dat comes out of u-noe-wat
is bewildering
at times
it might be yellowish or colorless
to choose between
the changing realities

it's true dat i have growled at the pencuci tandas
but onli after i told them my problem
dat they have not clean the shite properly
the mangkuk tandas dat i have began to love in my loneliness
in the toilet dat alienated me

the journey was a loyal teacher
who was never tire
in explaining the length of the dick
look i m just like you
still have pundi kencing
sensitive when is full
i believe it's done
and ready to go

i am you
freed from the toilet
its smell and scent
i have found myself

4 Comments:

Blogger wallpaper said...

lol... swt u go n make a poem just bcuz i jokingly said out the first 2 lines of si tandas' homecoming while walkin down d stairs wit u ...

2:22 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

marvelous marvelous xD XD xD

9:27 PM  
Blogger jakcrash said...

u seriously have too much time...

10:05 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wat a fantastic poem.....i personally feel dis is much better than Mohd Hj Saleh's 1...haha. It is damn funny..btw where u get de idea?!how long do u take to finish 'si tandas' homecoming'?
Do u hav another version 4 'there's been a death in the opposite house' o 'sonnet 18'?

1:45 PM  

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